Tuesday, November 07, 2006

OUCH!!!!! I hit my head on something. ”w…w….where am I?” “W….w... who am I?” As he struggles to find a light switch he tries to remember; not where he is, but WHO he is. As he feels for a wall, he finds a knob and twists it clockwise. A black light came on and everything looked purple, he turned the knob again clockwise and a red light came on, he turned it one more time and a regular light came on. As his eyes come to vision with the background he realizes he’s in a big closet. He saw what he hit, he hit the light straight above him. In this big closet shelf’s running all across the top border and sees nothing on them.
Looking at the setting in front of him, he looks to the far left corner and there is a small, old, rusted bed. In the right corner he finds a book shelf with old dusty papers on it. He sees a mirror on the right wall but nothing on the left. When he relizes he cant find a door anywhere, he panics , he turns around and there was a small door that was only half his size and it was locked, the door was made of metal he couldn’t possibly knock it down, and above the door was a strange black poster with the numbers 1313 on it in white, which all seemed familiar in a way but didn’t ring a bell.
Still confused and tired, he goes over to the rusty bed and sits down. As he sits down on the mattress, his weight shifts the ends of the bed making the mattress bend. With his back sore from when he woke up, he looks over and to his surprise he found a key, but to what? Then he looks across from him to the bookcase and he sees a box sitting suspiciously on the shelf. Grabbing the box curiously, he tries to open the box, but it doesn’t budge. Confused he looks at the key then back at the box where the key hole is and tries to fit it. The key didn’t work in the little slot. With rage he throws the key and it hit the mirror. To his surprise when it broke it reveled a safe lock with a note on it; he read”debehtrednu”. Laughsing he drops the note, but as it falls on the shattered glass he sees it, he picked it up then put a piece of the mirror to it, he then read”underthebed” under the bed he thinks as he turns to the bed then looks under it; he finds another strange looking chest; it had a lock code and a keyhole, the key fit on it and he sighs as he drops it. He looked around and looks at the strange poster above and reads out loud 1313, he hurries and twisted the numbers to 1313 to his relief it opens and another note appears it reads ”you are going to be here awhile why not read?” He looks up at the bookcase and takes grabs a book from the first pile. As he wipes off the dust he reads out the title” Nuclear Bomb Hits South Florida” he reads the description notices another note in the other stack of news papers about the messed up year of 2015. It read” uoyplehlliwsoloceht” he hurries and finds another piece of shattered mirror and reads out” the colors will help you” he understood what he had to do.
He finds the knob and twists it counterclockwise and the red light came on and he twisted it one more time and the black light came on, he then turns to look at the poster which had glowing words on it, it read” u need to look deeper…” he turns on the red light and it read” this time think inside the box” he turns on the normal light then picks up the box he found under the floor and finds a small black string which blended in with the box’s material.
He opens the secret hatch and out reveals another key he jumps up and grabbed the strange chest on the bookshelf and the key fit. It revealed an unusual looking key; this key was bigger and heavier than a normal key, and came with it another note, it reads” hello Lance Spencer, you don’t remember who you are because you have amnesia”, past comes clearer now” Your in here because of a nuclear war outside. I’m not sure if it’s over but it should be, in the safe where the mirror was is food, there have been mutations from the nuclear bomb so its best u stay in here for as long as possible”. He remembered now, its year 2010 in Parkland and the nuclear war has started. He sets down the note and knew why he had done the clues. It was so some time could pass by and it had worked too.
He wakes up at a time which he doesn’t know of. BANG! BANG! BANG! There are 3 big dents in the door. He doesn’t know what to do. Then it happened, the door busted open and a terrible, great, giant, gooey, red transparent monster with hands of a god came through and slaughtered him into pieces. And there he lies dead as a doorknob

1 comment:

cmm said...

this was really great! the detail was ineteresting, like " the old, rusted bed. I also liked the words backwards, i was trying to figure them out before i kept reading. The end made me want to know what else happens after the monster came in...good job

cmm=)