“THE MONSTER WITHIN”
It was a dark cloudy night; a few people were having a midnight walk. There names were Brian and Jesse. They jogged by this on house that had moss growing on the walls and sewage around it. It was as dirty as a garbage dump. “Help! Help!” someone cried. Brian and Jesse look at each other scared expression on there sweaty little faces. “Its coming from inside.” Brian whispered. Walking into the mans house was a gagging smell of sewage and wastes of body fluids.
When they tip toe inside they see a man cramped in a corner which is being towered over by a green slimy monster. Jesse picks up a rock and chucks it at the monster. The monster squeals and disappears. “Are you ok”? Brian asked. “Ye...y…yes.” The man replied. “Hello my name is Professor Kent and that thing is my creation.” “It took me years to make this creature and now it has turned on me”. Professor Kent said. “Well what ever it is we must stop it” Brian replied.
“Come.” The man whispered. “This is the antidote for the monster it will kill it instantly.” The Professor said. “Ok well help you kill the creature, but we will need weapons.” Brian replied. “Found one.” whispered Jesse. The monster starts to squeal hearing them chatter. He starts to gallop to them Jesse flips the gun up and the monster numerous times. Leaking with blood and steam the monster squeals. It stops and tumbles to the floor. Jesse turns around, “no need for the antidote.” Said Jesse in a smart alach tone. She turns around and it was gone. BAM! The monster had tackled Jesse and was on the floor. It raises his claw and stops. Brian had stabbed the antidote into the monster. It turns into ashes and blew away.
“Thank you so much.” Professor Kent said while breaking into an epiphany. “I there anyway I can repay you?” Kent asked wiping away his tears. “Maybe you can let us go back our walk.” Jesse replied. Every body starts laughing and goes on with the rest of there lives
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Your descriptions were good. It could have been longer and put together better. But other than that it was good. <3
It was a good story but it was kind of cofusing because there was some typos and grammar mistakes but it is still a great story
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