DREADFUL DISASTER
“Good evening Krystel, I was hoping you were free this Saturday at 6:45 PM to come and baby-sit for us.”
Maria questioned.
Sure I’d love to. I baby-sit three adorable little girls every Super Sensational Saturday, usually around the same time, 6:45 PM.
Emerson, or Emmy who is 5 years old, honey-glazed blonde hair, luscious brown eyes, and loves animals, like they were one of her sisters.
Jolie, who is 7 years old, with black, licorice colored hair, with brown bubbly eyes as well, and is a perfectionist, extremely close to perfect.
Then there is Taidem or “Tadie” who is the youngest one of all three.
She is 3 years old to be exact. She has brown-hazel hair and bursting brown eyes as well, with fair skin, loves to imitate her elders, loves to be the center of attention, and the Disney channel is like her second family. (That’s how she considers it)
They live in an immense, extremely wealthy area, with a great life and absolutely no flaws.
Arriving to Maria’s home, I nearly forgot how great it is to always have such a great companion by my side, Fifi, my dog, a poodle with white creamy colored hair, one of the smartest dogs and the most loyal and trust-worthy friends of mine, that comes with me every Saturday to keep me company.
Entering their beautiful home, I made myself comfortable with no time to mingle with the parents, but just enough time to make myself at home.
Maria and her husband John, left for dinner and left me in charge with all their rules set out for me on paper.
It was nearly 7:15 PM when preparing the children to hit the sack, since they had to go to bed at 7:30 PM sharp.
Thinking of how much time left to myself to watch my marathon of Degrassi, while reading, softly as Emmy, Taidie and Jolie fell asleep as quickly as you could say “Onomonopia.” It was an hour and a half into my marathon of Degrassi and I was feeling a little bored and un amused, like not entertained, so I drastically yanked the phone and called Bianca and Diana..
Diana, nearly 14, has goldilocks' hair, with green eyes, easily mistaken as Irish, and is very difficult to get through to her, but is a soul sister, and the best friend you can have once you do.
On the other hand Bianca is the complete opposite.
She has black hair, is very tan, obnoxiously loud, but fun to be around.
But most importantly, she completes the 3 of us, like peas in a pod.
Beging them to come and join me, they could not find any reason to say no.
“You two finally arrived; I was beginning to think that something happened to you guys.”
“Of course not, we just had a hard time finding this incredibly huge house you are in, but know that we did, do you mind opening the door?” Bianca and Diana replied.
“Sure". We all ran to the couch as the television instantly turned to channel 10 news without a touch of a button.
“Attention, Parkland, Coral Springs, there is a “cannibal” on the lose, last seen at Heron Bay, we do not know what development, but if you can at this moment, please turn all alarms on, lock all doors, and secure yourself from this unexpected disaster.”
“Oh my gosh…-this is UNBELIEVABLE!” Said Diana, the worry wart that she is.
I’ll go set the alarm and no worries it’s not like were gonna get eaten, we are in the safest place, you can be in and we also have each other by our sides in case of any emergency.
“I’m calling my parents.” Bianca said.
“Wait, no call them after we go look for my dog Fifi, she’s gone missing. She probably took a run for it when I was trying to set the alarm.”
“How could she have ran out?” Bianca & Diana questioned.
“Well there was a bit of a problem when trying to concentrate on the code, and then saw Diana almost having a panic attack, I just wasn’t paying attention, come on just hurry up and come help me find my dog.” Said, with great fear.
Running so fast, that it was nearly impossible to breathe, we were all screaming out “Fifi” hoping she would respond by finding her way back to us from the sound of our voices.
After about 20 min, swiftly flew by, Fifi came to her senses and ran back into my cold bare arms. The moon was full and we heard many wolves howling. Scared for our lives, not knowing what to expect, we then saw a face through the wind as it was blowing towards us.
We ran so fast, afraid of losing our lives, or each other, trying to hold on to dear life. We got back inside the house. Lights started flickering, and flickering, over and over until they became completely burnt. "Found a flashlight." I whispered
Maria questioned.
Sure I’d love to. I baby-sit three adorable little girls every Super Sensational Saturday, usually around the same time, 6:45 PM.
Emerson, or Emmy who is 5 years old, honey-glazed blonde hair, luscious brown eyes, and loves animals, like they were one of her sisters.
Jolie, who is 7 years old, with black, licorice colored hair, with brown bubbly eyes as well, and is a perfectionist, extremely close to perfect.
Then there is Taidem or “Tadie” who is the youngest one of all three.
She is 3 years old to be exact. She has brown-hazel hair and bursting brown eyes as well, with fair skin, loves to imitate her elders, loves to be the center of attention, and the Disney channel is like her second family. (That’s how she considers it)
They live in an immense, extremely wealthy area, with a great life and absolutely no flaws.
Arriving to Maria’s home, I nearly forgot how great it is to always have such a great companion by my side, Fifi, my dog, a poodle with white creamy colored hair, one of the smartest dogs and the most loyal and trust-worthy friends of mine, that comes with me every Saturday to keep me company.
Entering their beautiful home, I made myself comfortable with no time to mingle with the parents, but just enough time to make myself at home.
Maria and her husband John, left for dinner and left me in charge with all their rules set out for me on paper.
It was nearly 7:15 PM when preparing the children to hit the sack, since they had to go to bed at 7:30 PM sharp.
Thinking of how much time left to myself to watch my marathon of Degrassi, while reading, softly as Emmy, Taidie and Jolie fell asleep as quickly as you could say “Onomonopia.” It was an hour and a half into my marathon of Degrassi and I was feeling a little bored and un amused, like not entertained, so I drastically yanked the phone and called Bianca and Diana..
Diana, nearly 14, has goldilocks' hair, with green eyes, easily mistaken as Irish, and is very difficult to get through to her, but is a soul sister, and the best friend you can have once you do.
On the other hand Bianca is the complete opposite.
She has black hair, is very tan, obnoxiously loud, but fun to be around.
But most importantly, she completes the 3 of us, like peas in a pod.
Beging them to come and join me, they could not find any reason to say no.
“You two finally arrived; I was beginning to think that something happened to you guys.”
“Of course not, we just had a hard time finding this incredibly huge house you are in, but know that we did, do you mind opening the door?” Bianca and Diana replied.
“Sure". We all ran to the couch as the television instantly turned to channel 10 news without a touch of a button.
“Attention, Parkland, Coral Springs, there is a “cannibal” on the lose, last seen at Heron Bay, we do not know what development, but if you can at this moment, please turn all alarms on, lock all doors, and secure yourself from this unexpected disaster.”
“Oh my gosh…-this is UNBELIEVABLE!” Said Diana, the worry wart that she is.
I’ll go set the alarm and no worries it’s not like were gonna get eaten, we are in the safest place, you can be in and we also have each other by our sides in case of any emergency.
“I’m calling my parents.” Bianca said.
“Wait, no call them after we go look for my dog Fifi, she’s gone missing. She probably took a run for it when I was trying to set the alarm.”
“How could she have ran out?” Bianca & Diana questioned.
“Well there was a bit of a problem when trying to concentrate on the code, and then saw Diana almost having a panic attack, I just wasn’t paying attention, come on just hurry up and come help me find my dog.” Said, with great fear.
Running so fast, that it was nearly impossible to breathe, we were all screaming out “Fifi” hoping she would respond by finding her way back to us from the sound of our voices.
After about 20 min, swiftly flew by, Fifi came to her senses and ran back into my cold bare arms. The moon was full and we heard many wolves howling. Scared for our lives, not knowing what to expect, we then saw a face through the wind as it was blowing towards us.
We ran so fast, afraid of losing our lives, or each other, trying to hold on to dear life. We got back inside the house. Lights started flickering, and flickering, over and over until they became completely burnt. "Found a flashlight." I whispered
hoping to hear some kind of response. Diana, Bianca and I found each other and prayed that we were still alive, but then spotted blood dripping from the ceiling and the walls with scrambled words, which were unable to be read when running down the gloomy hallways with a red substance covering my shoes.
Diana tried whispering as her tears were falling to the ground. “Please tell me that you didn’t forget to set the alarm the last time we got back inside the house.” She questioned.
“I started drowning in my own tears hoping that my own flesh wouldn’t appear on the ceiling soon." "Woah this is way to predictable!" Bianca blurted out.
As we looked in each others eyes in the despair, we realized that we still had a way out and that was to call our parents. When looking for a way to escape, it felt like the canibal was watching our every move from every angle and corner of the house.
“The phones aren’t working, there is no signal on my cell phone, and I’m beginning to think this is going to become our death story.” Bianca said.
“ Lets go upstairs to make sure the children are safe and we will have to huddle up together and try to call and try to get a signal.” We are going to have to go out on limb and keep our chins up because none of us would want to have our heads on a platter.
Taidie and Emmy were sleeping tightly as they were both being carried in my arms without
Diana tried whispering as her tears were falling to the ground. “Please tell me that you didn’t forget to set the alarm the last time we got back inside the house.” She questioned.
“I started drowning in my own tears hoping that my own flesh wouldn’t appear on the ceiling soon." "Woah this is way to predictable!" Bianca blurted out.
As we looked in each others eyes in the despair, we realized that we still had a way out and that was to call our parents. When looking for a way to escape, it felt like the canibal was watching our every move from every angle and corner of the house.
“The phones aren’t working, there is no signal on my cell phone, and I’m beginning to think this is going to become our death story.” Bianca said.
“ Lets go upstairs to make sure the children are safe and we will have to huddle up together and try to call and try to get a signal.” We are going to have to go out on limb and keep our chins up because none of us would want to have our heads on a platter.
Taidie and Emmy were sleeping tightly as they were both being carried in my arms without
a sound or a bother and brought them to Jolie’s room and explained everything as they woke up.
“Emmy, Taidie, Jolie, these are my friends, Bianca and Diana, which I called over because of an emergency, which is completely unexplainable, but all you have to know is that you are safe if you remain with us at all times and not leave this room.”
Next thing that hit me was that
“Emmy, Taidie, Jolie, these are my friends, Bianca and Diana, which I called over because of an emergency, which is completely unexplainable, but all you have to know is that you are safe if you remain with us at all times and not leave this room.”
Next thing that hit me was that
Bianca was not present, she was missing!
Then Diana pulled
Then Diana pulled
the closet door and then appeared an arm and a leg with black to them, almost indicating that it was from Bianca.
We knew she was gone for good. With that shock in mind, we had to move on.
Diana and I picked up Taidie and Emmy and took Jolie by the hand. We ran downstairs and went in the master bedroom, hid under the bed and found a couple of bodies stored with an unforgettable smell.We couldnt stop thinking of how much it smelled like public toilets under that dreary bed.
All this flesh was smothered on us, as we then heard a stump becoming louder, louder, and louder, and it came closer to us, the cannibal, spotted us surrounded by these rotting bodies.
He grabbed me and screamed from afar! “Call 911!"
Trying to use
We knew she was gone for good. With that shock in mind, we had to move on.
Diana and I picked up Taidie and Emmy and took Jolie by the hand. We ran downstairs and went in the master bedroom, hid under the bed and found a couple of bodies stored with an unforgettable smell.We couldnt stop thinking of how much it smelled like public toilets under that dreary bed.
All this flesh was smothered on us, as we then heard a stump becoming louder, louder, and louder, and it came closer to us, the cannibal, spotted us surrounded by these rotting bodies.
He grabbed me and screamed from afar! “Call 911!"
Trying to use
self defense, but against a cannibal was too difficult.
The knife was
The knife was
digging into my skin deeper and deeper until it reached my bones, he was slicing me into pieces. He didn’t realize that I was not a piece of meat, but a
human with feelings, emotions, and a heart. With myself shredded to pieces, the security cameras caught all evidence and Diana then got a signal, just in time, and called 911. They came to the rescue with all the children safe and sound with barely a scratch, and Diana alive to thank for.
As the endangered beast tried to escape, the police shot him before he had time to do so.
The gory and body pieces surrounded in blood was not very appetizing but at least the ones who were worth it had another chance to survive.
The FBI cleaned up all bodies and other nonliving things. Suddenly Maria and John finally arrived with just Diana left to praise to and be grateful for!
human with feelings, emotions, and a heart. With myself shredded to pieces, the security cameras caught all evidence and Diana then got a signal, just in time, and called 911. They came to the rescue with all the children safe and sound with barely a scratch, and Diana alive to thank for.
As the endangered beast tried to escape, the police shot him before he had time to do so.
The gory and body pieces surrounded in blood was not very appetizing but at least the ones who were worth it had another chance to survive.
The FBI cleaned up all bodies and other nonliving things. Suddenly Maria and John finally arrived with just Diana left to praise to and be grateful for!
4 comments:
Great story! i thought that you described everyone with perfect detail and that you had great word choice. you also put in a good amount of dialouge. i couldn't stop reading it!
thank you!<3;p
I think your story was very scary. I liked the cannibalism
Geat story. The describtions were really long and good and it was very well organized. I really liked reading it.
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